Dizzy and the Harp of Life v1.0 [DOWNLOADABLE]

Thanks i think i done it right

{yolkfolk}:yahoo:
Is it ready yet?

Im getting inpatient

{dizzy}:cool:

me to - i luv new games {yolkfolk}:clap:

John already sent me his game :smile:
I played it and I can tell you it’s a pretty good one. Simple and fun.
I sent him some feedback and I guess he’s doing some last improvements now.
We’ll hear from him soon.

just finished the last few improvement on the game.

finally happy with it now

and cant wait to start a new one :teethy:

It's up on Yolkfolk.com too :smile:  

https://yolkfolk.com/games/dizzy-and-the-harp-of-life/

I've had a short play today, and I think It's rather good for your first game :smile: I'll have another go a bit later :cool:

THANKS you guys hope you enjoy it
all the help i got along the way was fantastic
you are all so helpful {yolkfolk}:cheers:
its a nice simple game and puzzles are fairly easy
any comments people want to make about the game good or bad
will be greatly recived
that way i know how to get going on my next game
to everyone who helped me thanks again

thanks hope you like it

thats my evening [probably more] sorted thanks john {yolkfolk}:clap:

Thats ok you should have it cracked by tonight its not too hard if im honest
but have fun playing {dizzy}:cool:

eggcellent 1st game there John! {yolkfolk}:clap: I just completed it!

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eggcellent 1st game there John! {yolkfolk}:clap: I just completed it!

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Wow thanks :teethy:

I've just completed it, congratulations, it's a really nice little game! {yolkfolk}:clap:

The graphics are nice, i especially like the rooms 'The Secret Chamber' and 'Fire Fire'. (i really like them!) {yolkfolk}:clap: I'll also single out glendas house, the look out point, graves, and the castle below ground for special mentions too. I also like the colouring of the characters, and objects like the torch handles. I think Colin may have a rival for 'nicest graphics' soon, with rooms like the ones i've mentioned!

You seem to have grasped the coding pretty well too, which bodes well for future games! :smile:

I also like the cover screen, and you've had a nice go at changing the HUD too, which i suspect you'll want to take further in future games!

Other suggestions i have for future games include pasting the speech text into Word to check the spelling and grammar, try and have a 'finish' screen that the player gets to see at the end of the game, and try to find a use for the coins if you're putting them into the game. Also try to put any speech text that characters make into quotation marks, so that it's more easily distiguishable from game narration. :smile:

Overall, a very good first game! Well done! {yolkfolk}:clap:

THANKS some good comments there something for me to think about.
im happy you like the rooms as they were the ones i edited {yolkfolk}:clap: think i found a style that i like and something i can take further in my new game.
i never even thought about putting the speach into word makes alot of sence
thanks again for your feedback

I've completed the game.

I like the way you've coloured in some of the rooms and the characters, and I second what Meph said about Zaks :tongue:

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Shouldn’t need quotation marks.. thats what the different colours are for… ?

Anyway a ‘woohoo’ is in order.
I thought this had some fantastic ideas..the fiery stuff certainly looked mensing. i got stuck on the troll and there was something else but i wont say anything in case people hadn’t played it yet.

Great little game, and no doubt you can expand those ideas for bigger and better things down the line.. also liked how almost each puzzle has a choice of twp possible items too try.

An whoa what a long flag pole.
And i kept expecting Zacks to shoot me!! slowley edging forward just in case.. lol

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SO happy you liked it :teethy: thought i would start with something small to start with.
as for zacks shooting i thought about it but something tells me he will be back to his evil ways in no time lol