@lightning oh i just had 3 other things in my pocket when catching the frog, got a coin for him
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New dizzy game "Dizzy's amazing dream" [BETA TESTING CLOSED]
Started by lightning on 28 June 2023 • 9,824 views
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@lightning
Hi.
As promised, here is the last of my corrections, I only focused on the major ones.
[spoiler title="Text"]Conversation with Painter after showing painted cardboard bucket.
(DIZZY) - WHAT IT IS?
Change to:-
(DIZZY) - WHAT'S THIS?
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(ARTIST) - ONLY I NEED ZINC COLOR PAINT.
Change to:-
(ARTIST) - NOW I NEED SOME SOME SILVER PAINT.
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(GAME) - DIZZY THREW A BUCKET AT THE DRAGON.
Change to:-
(GAME) - DIZZY THROWS THE BUCKET AT THE DRAGON'S HEAD.
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(GAME) - DIZZY BROKE THROUGH THE WALL A PICKAXE
Change to:-
(GAME) - DIZZY BREAKS THE WALL USING THE PICKAXE.
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After giving the net to the grim man.
(MAN) - WHAT A WONDERFUL THE SCOOPE NET ! I'LL CATCH A BUNCH OF LEECHES.
Change to:-
(MAN) - THIS IS PERFECT! I CAN CATCH LOTS OF LEECHES WITH THIS.
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After eating the red apple:
(DIZZY) - I'M NOT A BALL, A'M THE EGG !
Change to:-
(DIZZY) - I'M NOT A BALL, I'M AN EGG!
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Room Name -
BEGINNING NEW WORLD
Change to:-
A STRANGE NEW WORLD
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Giving the thoroughbred frog to the pet shop owner:
(DIZZY) - I'M NOT A TADPOLE, I'M IS DIZZY, AND WE'VE ALREADY TALKED.
Change to:-
(DIZZY) - I'M NOT A TADPOLE, I'M DIZZY!
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Speaking to dentist after bar brawl:
(DENTIST) - IF YOU WANT TO GET NEW TEETH PUT IN, THEN GET IN LINE.
Change to:-
(DENTIST) - IF YOU'RE ASKING FOR NEW TEETH, YOU'LL HAVE A WAIT IN THE QUEUE.
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(DENTIST) - I HAD A PROBLEM AND NOW MY BUSINESS IS UNDER THREAT OF CLOSURE.
Change to:-
(DENTIST) - I HAVE A SERIOUS PROBLEM AND MY BUSINESS IS IN DANGER OF CLOSING.
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(DIZZY) - WOW! WHERE IS IT SO IT HIS?
Change to:-
(DIZZY) - WOW! WHERE DID THIS HAPPEN?
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(DIZZY) - I KNOW HIM, HE'S A LEECH CATCHER
Change to:-
(DIZZY) - I KNOW HIM, HE WAS CATCHING LEECHES AT THE LAKE.
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Conversation with the old lady with the goat up a tree:
(OLD LADY) - OH, TROUBLE HAPPENED TO US
Change to:-
(OLD LADY) - OH, WE GOT INTO A SPOT OF BOTHER.
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Speaking to Frogla at the 'Silent Backwater'
(FROGLA) - WELL, YOU CAN ALSO CHANG YOUR MIND, THEN COME.
Change to:-
(FROGLA) - WELL, YOU CAN ALWAYS CHANGE YOUR MIND.
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Speaking to pet shop owner after speaking to Frogla.
(PET SHOP OWNER) - SHE IS IT COSTS 10 DUCATS
Change to:-
(PET SHOP OWNER) - HE IS WORTH 10 DUCATS.
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(PET SHOP OWNER) - I'M IS AN HONEST BUSINESSMAN.
Change to:-
(PET SHOP OWNER) - I'M AN HONEST BUSINESSMAN.
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Giving the frog to the patties saleswoman.
(GAME) - THE FROG QUICKLY ATE ALL A FLIES.
Change to:-
(GAME) - THE FROG QUICKLY CATCHES AND EATS ALL THE FLIES.
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Item:
A PATTIES
Change to:-
SOME PATTIES
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Speaking to the talking trees again.
(DIZZY) - HEY YOU! COMEDIANS UNCOUTH, THEAT ME TO AN APPLE
Change to:-
(DIZZY) - HEY, YOU BUNCH OF JOKERS! DO YOU HAVE ANY MORE APPLES?
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Giving the toxic apple to the pet shop owner:
(DIZZY) - YOU ARE ALLERGIC TO 'GMO'S.
Change to:-
(DIZZY) - IT LOOKS LIKE YOU'RE HAVING AN ALLERGIC REACTION.
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Gving the the metal key to the jeweller.
(DIZZY) - CAN YOU MAKE SUCH THE KEY OUT OF GOLD?
Change to:-
(DIZZY) - CAN YOU TURN THIS KEY INTO GOLD?
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Giving the gold key to Pinocchio:
(DIZZY) - THIS IS EXACTLY YOUR KEY
Change to:-
(DIZZY) - IS THIS YOUR GOLD KEY?
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(GAME) - PINOCCHIO LEFT, AND DIZZY WAITED, WAITED ...
Change to:-
(GAME) - DIZZY WAITS FOR PINOCCHIO TO RETURN...
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(THEO) - DIZZY! IT'S GOOD THAT I MET YOU !
Change to:-
(THEO) - THERE YOU ARE, DIZZY!
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(DIZZY) - THEO, WHAT ARE YOU DOIN HERE?
Change to:-
(DIZZY) - THEO, WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?
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(DIZZY) - ?! ?! ?! ?! ?! ?! WHICH IS MY WIFE ? WE'RE NOT MARRIED YET
Change to:-
(DIZZY) - MY WIFE?! BUT WE'RE NOT EVEN MARRIED!
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Conversation with Daisy:
(DAISY) - DID YOY BRING AN OPENER ?
Change to:-
(DAISY) - DID YOU BRING AN OPENER THEN?
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(DAISY) - I GET IT, THE THERE OF YOU WANTED TO DRINK
Change to:-
(DAISY) - I SEE, YOU WENT SOMEWHERE ELSE FOR A DRINK.
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I forgot to mention last time, when I first finished the game, I was still carrying the scuba, and Dizzy was still wearing the scuba all throughout the ending.
Would it be possible for Dizzy to automatically remove the scuba as soon as Theo appears?
Everything else I thought was OK.
Hopefully we'll get to see the final release soon. :smile:
[quote data-userid="3" data-postid="91326"]
@lightning . . .
I forgot to mention last time, when I first finished the game, I was still carrying the scuba, and Dizzy was still wearing the scuba all throughout the ending.
Would it be possible for Dizzy to automatically remove the scuba as soon as Theo appears?
[/quote]Hi,
Thanks Adam. I didn't think about scuba gear, thanks for the tip.
I thought I'd give this game a go and I'm not disappointed. However I'm stuck. I've only got an ordinary frog which I can't sell to anyone. Pinocchio doesn't want anything I've got. I've got the cardboard and given it to the repair man but now he needs glue. i've tried the stationery lady but she's not responding. Please could I have a hint.
[quote data-userid="380" data-postid="91328"]
I thought I'd give this game a go and I'm not disappointed. However I'm stuck. I've only got an ordinary frog which I can't sell to anyone. Pinocchio doesn't want anything I've got. I've got the cardboard and given it to the repair man but now he needs glue. i've tried the stationery lady but she's not responding. Please could I have a hint.
[/quote]Hi,
Pinocchio wants to compose a song, but he has trouble making rhymes. You will receive the desired item after a certain series of actions. First you need to get the glue, it lies on the shelf, in the sales tent of the stationery saleswoman.
Thanks Lightning. I've now got the glue but can't get the bucket to work on the dragon. have I missed something?
[quote data-userid="380" data-postid="91330"]
Thanks Lightning. I've now got the glue but can't get the bucket to work on the dragon. have I missed something?
[/quote]What is the name of the bucket you are trying to use?
@lightning the cardboard bucket!
[quote data-userid="380" data-postid="91332"]
@lightning the cardboard bucket!
[/quote]The dragon will not be afraid of a cardboard bucket. {yolkfolk}:joy: On the territory of the market there is a person who can help Dizzy transform a cardboard bucket. And then, you will need to contact another merchant.Thank you ! one sleeping dragon. Now to sort out the rest of the cave.
I'm stuck on the following:
- Blue Parrot: I think I need a mug to drink beer from. Or start a fight some how?
- Red apple (from the tree): does it do anything? (I know what the green apple does.)
- Kettle: dodgy guy says it doesn't look antique enough.
- Feather trees: if anything beyond the plant-eating thing?
- Poisonous mushroom: assuming I'll be able to do something with this a little later on in the game.
- Cottage with the dog sign: am I able to access this cottage?
- Tree with the cones on it: haven't gotten anything off it as yet.
I think I need to do something in the Blue Parrot now in order to get things moving again but I can't figure out what.
Items: kettle, pickaxe, hammer, basket of apples, boots, thread, tongs, ducat, honey, jam, tin of zucchini, matches, firewood, helmet, frog, thoroughbred frog
(Note: I know I can sell the thoroughbred frog to the pet guy but I haven't done this as the thread suggests there is someone else who wants it.)
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A fight in a bar will start without Dizzy's direct participation, but he has an indirect relationship with this.
A red apple only makes Dizzy red. It is the talking trees that joke with travelers in this way.
The kettle is of modern manufacture and is of no interest even to scammers. By the way, if you read the name of this guy on the contrary, it will become clear who he is.
Trees that grow feathers instead of leaves are a complex fantastic organism, with separately growing organs of nutrition, touch and smell, interconnected by a root system.
The toxic mushroom can be eaten, it will cause Dizzy to have an allergic reaction, just like with apples. The effect of this reaction is neutralized when Dizzy bathes in a healing spring, which is located in a cave.
You cannot enter the cottage. Although the dog there is kind, it licks those who enter to death. {yolkfolk}:joy:
A tree with cones for beauty and does not affect the passage of the game.
Whether or not to sell thoroughbred frog is up to you. There are two paths of passage and nothing terrible will happen, one path will be a little longer, but in my opinion it is more funny and interesting.
They let you into the VIP bar through face control, Dizzy needs to become like his visitors. (think about mushroom).
I'm stuck on the following:
- . . .
[/quote]No need to accustom Dizzy to alcohol. {yolkfolk}:joy:A fight in a bar will start without Dizzy's direct participation, but he has an indirect relationship with this.
A red apple only makes Dizzy red. It is the talking trees that joke with travelers in this way.
The kettle is of modern manufacture and is of no interest even to scammers. By the way, if you read the name of this guy on the contrary, it will become clear who he is.
Trees that grow feathers instead of leaves are a complex fantastic organism, with separately growing organs of nutrition, touch and smell, interconnected by a root system.
The toxic mushroom can be eaten, it will cause Dizzy to have an allergic reaction, just like with apples. The effect of this reaction is neutralized when Dizzy bathes in a healing spring, which is located in a cave.
You cannot enter the cottage. Although the dog there is kind, it licks those who enter to death. {yolkfolk}:joy:
A tree with cones for beauty and does not affect the passage of the game.
Whether or not to sell thoroughbred frog is up to you. There are two paths of passage and nothing terrible will happen, one path will be a little longer, but in my opinion it is more funny and interesting.
They let you into the VIP bar through face control, Dizzy needs to become like his visitors. (think about mushroom).
Thanks @lightning! I'll channel my inner Sherlock to solve those lovely cryptic clues!
[quote data-userid="117982" data-postid="91338"]
Thanks @lightning! I'll channel my inner Sherlock to solve those lovely cryptic clues!
[/quote]Perhaps the meaning of the hint was distorted in translation. First, eat the blue mushroom and go to the bar. If Dizzy is still green, then you need to dip into the healing spring, and then eat the mushroom.Which of my answers do you not understand? I'll try to formulate the proposal in a different way.
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Thank you ! one sleeping dragon. Now to sort out the rest of the cave.
[/quote]How are you doing? Have you been able to move forward?
[quote data-userid="3" data-postid="91326"]
. . .
Would it be possible for Dizzy to automatically remove the scuba as soon as Theo appears?
. . .
[/quote]Hi, Adam.I found a way to remove the scuba automatically, besides that, I added some sound effects and used some previously unused items and added a couple of new ones, as well as a few new dialogues.
Adam, please check these dialogues for correctness:
[spoiler title="Dialogs"]1. Sir, would you like to buy some boots?
These boots are made of leatherette, and I'm not interested in them.
2. What are you going to do, oval face?
Pinocchio, do you have paper?
I have something better for you.
3. Why are you putting dynamite under me?
Because it doesn’t fit in your pocket.
I’ll help you now.
4. And next time, don't step on my head with dirty feet.
5. Do you buy gold teeth?
Present a certificate from a dentist.
It's not my tooth, I found it.
I won't take it, maybe you stole it from someone.
And one more question. In your version of this sentence, the words "SOME" are written twice in a row, is this not a mistake?
(ARTIST) – ONLY I NEED ZINC COLOR PAINT.
Change to:- (ARTIST) – NOW I NEED SOME SOME SILVER PAINT.[/spoiler]
@lightning No, cryptic clues are great!! I now know what my issue was - previously I hadn't been able to eat the mushroom. I kept getting the "it's poisonous" message. After sorting how to eat it, I'm on my way again! It's a great game - thank you!
@lightning Hi.
That's good to read.
And yes, the new dialogues look good to me. :tup:
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In your version of this sentence, the words “SOME” are written twice in a row, is this not a mistake?
[/quote]
Yes, that's my mistake, sorry. :yes:
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And yes, the new dialogues look good to me. :tup:
[/quote]Thanks Adam. I'll let you know when the game is complete.
Great game, when will there be a update to download :)